Comments on: Issue 5 – Page 2 | It’s All Good

By: PlantPerson

PlantPerson — Sat, 04 Jul 2009 15:52:32 +0000

Well, I've reverted back to Amusivity. Ambrose Rinilchi's going to have to go back into development. Maybe it'll be ready for the next issue.

By: Duffy

Duffy — Sat, 04 Jul 2009 00:57:45 +0000

Also forgot to add that your attention to detail is excellent. A lesser cartoonist would have mistakenly gotten the chess board squares around the wrong way.

By: PlantPerson

PlantPerson — Fri, 03 Jul 2009 21:21:02 +0000

Thanks for the input. I'm worried about the font, too. Some things seem to be blending into other things a bit too much (exclamation points, for example). I'll experiment with it a little bit longer, and then maybe I'll switch everything back to Amusivity until Ambrose Rinilchi is better-developed. My goal is to eventually do away with the dot-shading altogether. I just have to hone my skills to the point where I don't need it anymore. It should be just a matter of time.

By: Duffy

Duffy — Fri, 03 Jul 2009 15:55:32 +0000

Hi John, I like this style best. Less shading and more clean drawn lines. Simple black and white. Its very effective. Not sure about the type font thought. Found it easy to read your other font. I find im focussing on trying to read the text without actually taking it in. But love the simple art style – and love the second frame of page 1. Nice angle.